Business logo redux

[taimatsu]

Because I want to print labels ASAP I have come up with a design; it has no connection to the name of the business other than the Japanese angle, which is not ideal, but it's pretty. Thoughts?

Label 1 First attempt at label for hikari arts

Comments

[undyingking.livejournal.com]

I think it's very cute and nice. Agreed that the url font is a bit hard but also agreed that softening it might make it less readable... although I guess even if it's not very readable, people will probably be able to make the leap to interpreting it via the name of the business. Would be interesting to see a variant, anyway!